Wednesday, January 12, 2011
The Art of Embellishment
The greatest part of story telling is the embellishment. Take the bones and flesh of the whole truth - and nothing but the truth - and add the experience of it - with a dash of metaphor to make it even more real.
I was terrified of the wilderness. Reluctantly, I got off the matatu (small pickup with small camper on the back, capable of packing in 50 people, like sardines, as I recall).
The walk to the village was a good 9 kilometers still, along a narrow path through trees and a lot of underbrush. I took in a breath of courage, focusing on the beauty of being in an African jungle and the promise of a great week ahead.
I proceeded along the path, listening to a distinct rustling in the underbrush. Having become accustomed to being followed by children, I assumed that the children were following along in the bushes. I imagined them as guardians keeping me safe from any dangers which might be lurking along the path.
Fearlessly, I proceeded, enjoying the wind whistling through the trees which shaded me from the burning sun.
As I approached the village clearing, there was a crowd of people who lived there, shouting and pointing. Wondering why there were no drums and native dancing to go along with this welcome, I nevertheless, began waving back.
Soon enough, I heard the words they were shouting, "Simba, Simba!!!" As unfamiliar with Swahili as I was at the time, I knew what they were pointing at with such vigor.
When I arrived well within their proximity, I turned and indeed saw a big old lion. He had been kind enough to accompany me along the path. It was he, with his huge mane, who had kept me safe, not the hoards of children I had imagined.
While some in the village were building a fire to send the lion on his way, I thanked him for escorting me through the jungle. He returned with a low key roar, and walked back into the jungle. No one was hurt.
I do have to admit, that I experienced some after-shock a few minutes later.
This has been a true story of unexpected adventure, laced with metaphor. As you reflect on your own journey, focus on such an adventure you have experienced. Please share it in the comments. It is well worth the telling.
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3 comments:
Your posts are so powerful, and filled with life and learning. I imagine you 80 years old in experience. Your charm shines through...
Shamai
Wow! What an experience! Lynda
You are so full of it. I am willing to bet that it's either all true or a fantasy you were having while playing with your cat. Tony
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